Please check out my essay and tell me the truth

<p>I would really appreciate some parental help on my essay. My life for the last month has been dedicated to this. If you guys could just read it and tell me if it is up to the caliber of Yale, Princeton or Harvard, I would greatly appreciate it. PM me or just post, and I'll send it. I'll need your response ASAP!!! thanks thanks thanks</p>

<p>im not a parent but i head our school's newspaper so im used to editing. I'll give you an honest response and fast</p>

<p>I'll give some editing/feedback</p>