Please critique my essay!!

<p>anyone willing to nitpick my essay? feedback (flow, topic, grammar) is appreciated!! thank you!</p>

<p>Yep, I have my hand up.</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll read it.</p>

<p>thanks fellas, i’ll PM it tomorrow</p>

<p>Lets have it.</p>

<p>would anyone else please look over my essay ???</p>

<p><a href="mailto:population_ctrl@yahoo.com">population_ctrl@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>send it over :)</p>

<p>Yeah, I’ll give it a go. send it to me in a PM?</p>

<p>I’ll read. :slight_smile:
just PM me SVP.</p>