<p>Hi,</p>
<p>I’ve finally started writing some more essays. I was hoping that some of you (non '14ers) could critique the opening paragraph of my essay. I’ll PM it to you and try to explain the idea, but I want to get some feedback before I go ahead (it takes me ages to write these essays and I haven’t got much time to waste).</p>
<p>But no '14ers please! Even if you’ve already submitted you’re early app, I’m sorry…</p>
<p>I’m applying to Stanford, MIT, Berkeley and a few Ivies if you’re curious.</p>
<p>Thanks</p>