Please critique/proofread my essay :)

College Essays
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<p>Hi I just finished and checked my own essay. I need another perspective on it.</p>

<p>The topic is…Select an experience or event that has challenged you this past year and describe its impact on you. (500)</p>

<p>I am not a great essay writer so I would like some help…thank you</p>

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<p>u can send it to me. i’ll look at it after i submit mine.</p>

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<p>I will take a look at it.</p>