<p>Please critique my essay if you’re interested. It’s a flexible essay that could be expanded to a personal statement or condensed into an activity short answer. Apologies if I am not clear enough, etc. etc. (One poster ripped me apart for this, I’ve been having a tough week on CC lol)</p>
<p>i try to help you, pm it over.</p>
<p>sure, PM me. & would you mind reading mine?</p>
<p>nope, PM it over. any other takers? please!</p>
<p>yea ill be happy to read yours in exchange for reading mine! Im at a school CPU now and dont have my flash drive on me, so if you PM yours over now, ill send mine when i get home! Look forward to your mssg!</p>