Please critique this intro

College Essays
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<p>actually, just ask me to PM to you XD.</p>

<p>Yes, I’m aware that it’s 12:25 where I am. I’m also aware that I’m only on my second paragraph. LMAO</p>

<p>EDIT: sorry, this is for UC’s. the first prompt. so 1000 words for two essays.</p>

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<p>Just wondering, what college is this for? Any character limit?</p>

3

<p>it’s for UC’s.</p>

4

<p>bump
up
my
post</p>

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<p>sure send it over</p>