Please edit my Letter of Interest?

I’m not sure how to write it. I basically just started writing what came to mind although I feel like I became way to emotional at the end…

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I should be short – not a long emotional discourse. State your continued interest. Present any major accomplishments (if any) since your application was filed. Highlight something you can bring to campus. And if true you can write “if accepted I will attend”.

i could read it for you!

Can I please have some more readers?

I will read it…

I will read it too. I just completed one and would be happy to show you what I did, although it was fairly extensive.

If you do a search for IWannabe_Brown, 10 years ago he wrote an amazing one that is still on here somewhere