Please evaluate my transfer essay (i need to cut 100 words)

Transfer Students
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<p>The limit on personal statement on JMU, which im applying to is 500 words. </p>

<p>my essay has 608, so i will need to dumb it down 108 words. and I havent found a good chunk of it to cut out. </p>

<p>its a personal epiphany/improvement essay.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look. PM me.</p>

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<p>PM me (with the prompt)… I’ll give it a read.</p>