<p>Western and Korean Sex Education</p>
<pre><code>Sex, how much would people know about it? Some may have attained their knowledge about sex by practical experiences, which is fine but not enough. Knowing about sex through officially and scientifically proved educational courses is important and necessary to people since it contains as long as people value their own bodies and their loved ones bodies. Younger generation of the world especially needs more delicate approaches and beneficial information about sex since they are still in processes of maturing both physically and psychologically. In order to learn well about sex, students should be offered with sex educations provided at schools. However, even though everyone in any region of the world needs a good sex education, not all of them seems to have it. Western sex educations in schools are more informative and helpful for students than Korean sex educations in schools.
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<p>To begin with, western sex educations provide more information about biological aspects of reproduction than Korean sex educations. Students are to study about sex chromosomes, fertilization of gametes (sex cells), and genetics during sex education course, so that they learn how sexual intercourses are not just providing pleasures but actually creating living organisms. Meanwhile, Korean sex education does not include biology. Instead, reproduction is included in science classes, so that students learn reproduction separated from sex education. In this way, not all students may get the relevance between the two.
Moreover, western sex educations emphasize a lot on different kinds and importance of contraception. Students learn about various types of contraceptive tools such as Condoms, contraceptive pills, diaphragms, and their correct usages. They also get to actually touch and apply the tools in classes to mockup genitals. Korean sex educations are done by diagrams and explanations in textbooks instead of real contraceptive tools. Instructors do not display real contraceptive tools to students, but also sometimes appropriate explanations are not given. Teaching students about contraception is for them to prevent unprepared pregnancies, but it would be no use if they do not know how to apply the tools for it.
However, western sex education classes do not deal with how sex crimes are done, and how students should react when such incidents happen to them or to someone near. Western education deals more about problems related to sexual and social relationships. During anonymous Question and Answer (QnA) session with teachers, students ask for more specific questions about their own sexual relationships, such as orgasm, homosexual relationships, pregnancy, and many more. Korean sex educations, on the other hand, emphasize heavily on studying sexual crime cases, and various ways to prevent those incidents. Schools teach students how such crimes usually happen, where they can get help from, and what they should do when they are sexually in danger.
In conclusion, Western sex educations in schools are more informative and helpful for students than Korean sex educations in schools. Korean sex educations emphasize on ways for students to keep themselves away and safe from sex crimes, which is important and Western sex education is lack of. Western sex education is, however, still more beneficial for students because it provides more scientific knowledge and practical contraceptive information.</p>
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