Please give feedbacks to my PS.

College Essays
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<p>Hi,</p>

<p>Could anyone proof-read my PS? I have received both [really] negative and [really] positive comments about this essay. Thus, I’m not quite sure about it.</p>

<p>Thank you.</p>

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<p>You can send it to me if you want</p>

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<p>well, i’m new here as well and I can do it. I am Entertainment Editor for my high school newspaper. We are the number one in our entire state! I just got help on here today for my ps and essays! You can send it my way if you wish!</p>