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<p>Topic:every fresh crisis is an opportunity in disguise
From every thing that goes wrong,one learns what to do or what not to do the next time that particular incident occurs.There is always a lesson learned from each problem.There are quite a few cases where the trial was actually an opportunity in disguise.
I attended a boxing school for 6 months in 2002.In this school,there was a particular student I took notice of and his name was Ali.Ali was a skilled and recognized boxer.There were others like him but one thing distinguished him.Each practice match he had to fight,he picked something from his opponent.Each time,he would almost get beat down by his opponent in the first round;but by the second round,he would have picked up the technique of boxing his opponent used and would then use it against any other boxer.
Most times,people focus on the problem itself rather think of how the solution of that problem can be of help.A fresh problem is like a new exam.After you’ve tacked all or most of the questions,and passed,you move to a new level or a new class.They don’t come if you plan on staying at the same level.They come as stepping stones to the next level.Just like games.Each new task takes you to the next level.
Always see the help the solution of any problem will bring you and try to solve the problem rather than just focus on the fact that there is indeed a problem.</p>