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<h2>" Are decisions made quickly just as good as decisions made slowly and carefully ? "</h2>

<pre><code> " You have 5 seconds to decide " my dad said to me " Do you want to take 500 pounds or to take this bicycle " . I had to take a quick decision . Accordingly , I chose the bicycle because it seemed excessively bright to me , then . However , after two weeks when I found my bicycle broken and futile , I thought about the “Choice” day and said to my self " What if my dad gave me time to decide . Would I pick it ? " The answer , unfortunately , was absolutely no because if I had the money I would buy something that I would never regret to have . Careful and slow decisions are not as good as those “haphazard” , quick decisions . My choice and my sister’s tell so .

After my graduation from intermediate school and in the same day of my sister’s graduation from primary school , my dad took us to buy us gifts . At first , we went to a toy shop , where my sister chose to go to buy her gift . She entered the shop , and after 10 minutes she got out singing with a toy in her hands . Actually , she bought a good-looking toy .

Next , we went to a bicycle shop so that I can buy my gift . After an hour , my dad got bored and exhausted , so he forced me to choose quickly - a bicycle or 500 pounds , and I chose the bicycle .

After two weeks , my bicycle got broken . However , my little sister still , till now , keeping her toy . I wondered how . When I asked her , she told me : She saw that toy with her friend , thus she adore it , so she decided to buy it for its robust structure .

In conclusion , my little sister taught me a lesson : Slow , careful choices are , indeed , better than quick , " uneducated " ones . Therefore , choose carefully please .
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