Please help me edit my essay

<p>I’m trying to make it as unique, passionate, and engaging as possible yet I still feel like it’s lacking all of these. Idk, just read and see.</p>

<p>I really, really prefer current Stanford students so no '14ers or '15ers. </p>

<p>Thanks! =)</p>

<p>If you need advice from non-Students, I am the one. PM me if you like.</p>

<p>PM me… il get back to you asap…i promise :]</p>