Please, help me fix my commonapp essay!

<p>I really want to get into this school and though my essay is genuine, I fear it doesn’t seem to come off that way.</p>

<p>First step, post this in the “College Essay” forum.</p>

<p>Second step, follow the first step…</p>

<p>Third Step, ignore this step and the second step.</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>