<p>Can someone please put all of the following info into a sentence or two?
I find the info too much for such brevity and cannot do a good job. :(</p>
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<li>I moved from Korea to America when I was 13</li>
<li>education in Korea was extremely rigid (Spartan, quite)</li>
<li>that in America is completely different–fosters freedom, expression, creativity, etc.</li>
<li>I was struck by the new English teacher’s way of teaching (out of the frame, expressive…)</li>
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<p>I need to emphasize the significance of my English class about how it changed my view and way of thinking. Well, that’s what my paragraph is about.
That moving to the States part doesn’t have to be accented… I just need to mention it to explain how narrow-sided my world used to be.</p>
<p>I would appreciate any comments or advice!
Thank you in advance! :)</p>