Please help me with my essay

<p>Now english is not my strongest subject, so I need some critiquing. The prompt is for UT. Choose an issue of importance to you and write an essay in which you explain the significance of that issue. I have two essays that are mainly the same except for the end. Will someone read both and help me? Thanks.</p>

<p>I’m not sure if my essays are on topic or stray too far off topic.</p>

<p>PM them to me and I’ll look over them for you.</p>

<p>I could do the same.</p>

<p>i am at work and i have nothing better to do i will read and be my guest to do a background check</p>