<p>Please please please read my essay and critique it. I normally work best under pressure and thought this case would be the same, but it’s not happening like that so far… I would very much appreciate it!</p>
<p>I’m not finished with it, yet, because I can’t quite figure out how to transition from talking about my sister into how that would make me a good addition to the UF campus.</p>
<p>Thank you in advance :)</p>