Please help review UC essay prompt 2

<p>Hi everyone! I was wondering if you guys could take the time to help give me some feedback/constructive criticism on my UC essay for prompt 2! I'd be happy to email it to anyone that'd be kind enough to help me critique it! Thank you so much for your time (:</p>

<p>I’ll read it. I pm’d you my email.</p>

<p>thanks so much! is it gmail or yahoo or…? colelge confidential doesnt let you show it xP</p>

<p>Alw333, I’m willing to read it. PM me your essay, and I’ll reply you with my comments.</p>

<p>PM me! Ill critique it.</p>

<p>Add me to your list! Just PM me and I’ll provide some insight =)</p>