<p>I am looking for people to review my application essay. It’s my main one going out to: Harvard, Princeton, MIT, PENN, UChicago, Dartmouth, Yale, and Northwestern, so it’s gotta be some quality literature. Leave a message here if you’re interested, and I’ll PM it over. Insults welcome. Let’s not go plagiarizing me though, although that would be quite the task concerning my subject matter!</p>
<p>friends? any help here?</p>
<p>Send it in! I will try my best.</p>
<p>Send it. I’m a good editor.</p>
<p>e-mail it to me</p>
<p>hey! I’m curious! PM it to me</p>
<p>(no fear of plagiarism!.. I’m a rising freshman at Duke U.)</p>
<p><a href="mailto:kdavis90@msn.com">kdavis90@msn.com</a> i’d be happy to read it</p>
<p>You’re the devil dammit! EVIL, YOU ARE! lol</p>
<p>yeah, sure…be glad to help out</p>
<p>send me…i have plenty of free time to read it over and give you suggestions</p>
<p>(PM)</p>
<p>I’m in. 10chars</p>
<p>Sure, send me a PM</p>
<p>I’ll read it. :)</p>
<p>PM it to me, if you wish. I’m an honest person and I have my own essay ideas, so you are safe with me.</p>
<p>I you want my help, I’d be happy to help you (PM me).</p>
<p>I’ll be applying to Princeton and Penn as well (probably), not gonna plagiarize anything though. I’ve already reviewed your powerlifting essay in case you remember (one hour ago 
)</p>
<p>I’ll read it and give a response if you would like</p>
<p>hey 1mx:</p>
<p>You’ve got a hell of a story to tell. I just PM’ed your essay back to you completely rewritten in order to provide an example of what I think you could do with it. Your original essay missed the strength of your story. Read what I wrote. Even if you don’t like the voice or object to some of the changes I made about what you considered important or how you felt, try to avoid having an essay as focused on your “business smarts” as the one you wrote. If you demonstrate that you have business smarts AND a heart and are mature, they’ll love you.</p>
<p>Kapiche?</p>
<p>You can PM it to me… I’ll also be applying but don’t worry I’m an honest person and I’m not applying to the schools that you are</p>
<p>i’ll read it. PM me</p>
<p>Send Send Send Send Send!</p>