Please look over my essay!!!

College Essays
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<p>Hey! Can someone please look over my essay and give me some tips? I want to make it perfect. </p>

<p>I’ll pay you 5 dollars for your help, here is link.</p>

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<p>Thanks :]</p>

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<p>I’ll do it for a Facebook like. Send me a PM with the prompt, essay, and an e-mail for me to send it back to you with comments!</p>