Please look through my Personal Statement

College Essays
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<p>I’m applying for colleges from Vietnam and really have some problems finding sb can look through my essays. I really need critical comments since I know my essays are not free from errors. So if you don’t mind please give me a hand :smiley: </p>

<p>Leave your email, I will send it to you immediately. Thanks a bunch !!!</p>

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<p>i’ll try to read and feed back
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<p>bump bump bump</p>

<p>I am getting desperate…</p>