<p>I don’t think I need to keep this private, since it’s not a linguistic masterpiece or anything- so please just help me. Should I elaborate better, make it shorter/longer, more story-like, or anything like that? I don’t know how I’m supposed to make my Additional Information sound >.<</p>
<h2>Anyways it reads:</h2>
<h2>Every summer since 2006, Ive been in charge of babysitting my three cousins Jason, Sarah, and Brian (now 8, 10, and 11, respectively) on the weekdays, because their parents, as well as my parents, work full-time. Their dad drops them off at my house at 6am, and picks them up at around 4:30pm. Although it is hard work to keep three hyperactive adolescent entertained, it is also very satisfying. I have come to appreciate all the frills that come with taking care of kids, whether it be cooking for them, playing games (most of which we conjured), or just watching television with them. By the time they leave, I admit, Im tired, but I also feel content to know Ive helped and spent time with my loved ones.</h2>
<p>My most time-consuming extracurricular activity on my junior year was, by far, the Integrated Project (IP). IP is a very complex, but rewarding, yearlong project that has been a tradition in my school for over a decade. IP involves two parts: research and application. My team had to thoroughly research the state of the United States in the 1980s; our research would be reviewed by my AP US History teacher on a monthly basis. By the end I had countless pages of political, economic, social, and daily life information of the time. My group would use the research gathered to create a play and film, which was presented at the end of the school year. The presentation was met with a standing ovation. </p>
<p>I was the group leader, director, co-video editor, co-historian, co-scriptwriter, and actor of my IP group. </p>
<p>Excerpts of the production can be found here:</p>
<h2>[YouTube</a> - Broadcast Yourself.](<a href=“http://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=3B9857382F0721A7]YouTube”>http://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=3B9857382F0721A7)</h2>
<p>Any way I should change what I wrote? Any comments and criticisms are welcome, thanks.</p>