Please Please grade my SAT essay frm the range of 2-6:)

<p>''Each fresh crisis is an opportunity in disguise''</p>

<p>A positive attitude is essential for a happy and content life.Only with a positive attitude can one see a crisis as an opportunity.Influential and powerful people have often proved it.</p>

<p>A fight with a co-worker might seem like a crisis but it instead can be an opportunity to communicate with him/her effectively and build a healthy relationship.</p>

<p>An unsatisfied customer stormed inside the bakery of my friend's father and showed his agitation.My friend's father saw this crisis as an opportunity to improve the quality of his bakery production by listening to the complaints of the customer patiently.</p>

<p>During the Old Regime of France,the system of priveleges by biert prevailed and only the third estate which comprised of the working class was supposed to pay taxes.When the king,Louis xvi,planned to increase the taxes ,many people saw this as a crisis.The crisis aggrandized when the king refuted the idea of bringing true democracy in the meeting,in which the law of increasing taxes was to be passedThis crisis actually paved way for France to become a constitutional monarchy and do away with the system of priveleges, abig step towards the road of democarcy and equality.</p>

<p>Thus,a crisis can actually change one's life for the better if one tries to look up for ooportunities which can unlocked from the facade of a crisis.</p>

<p>I would give this a low to mid-2. Your examples are not well-developed, and there are serious spelling and grammar errors. However, your examples do support your thesis pretty well.</p>

<p>The **** is this.</p>

<p>This is the most illogical piece of writing I have ever had the displeasure of reading. You've posted this essay in the College Essay forum and another in the SAT forum as well. Before assailing the eyes of CCers with such garbage, try to make sense.</p>