Please Please Help Me!!!!

<p>I was wondering if you could edit my essay. </p>

<p>This is for early action to MIT. Please feel free to edit any grammar, spellings, etc. and give any advice. Also, could you tell me how original it is, and if it will make me stand out?</p>

<p>Thanks so much for helping
“Zipper”</p>

<p>Very provakative essay. Makes a lot of fun of teachers, and mocks them. Very interesting to read.</p>

<p>please pm me to read this mocking essay that I hope will get me into MIT</p>