please proof read my admission essay for UT

<p>I was scared someone would steal my essay so I deleted it. Sorry for the inconvenience.</p>

<p>i did that too so i just email the person and make sure that they wont use them plus i did early action so im not to worried about them stealing it since mine are already in the system if youd like u can email me urs to andres.garcia_1 @ y a h o o .com and i can send it back to you with notes etc… up to you tho</p>

<p>^ would not trust</p>