Please proof-read my Swat Essay!

[theonekid]

<p>My last essay for college apps!!! Please someone proof read it for me!</p>

<p>(Due within hours)
Thanks</p>

[marite]

<p>Swat essay</p>

<p>PM it to me.</p>

[californian]

<p>If you are still needing another reviewer</p>