<p>Self-explanatory, I would like it if someone could check it for mistakes and also give some general comments. Thanks!</p>
<p>Anyone? I’m a bit wary of anyone who joined this year…</p>
<p>Ask someone at school to read it for you. You’re just asking for it to be stolen.</p>
<p>You could say that to every poster in the essay forum.</p>
<p>In fact, that should be the new sticky.</p>
<p>I can help…</p>