Please Read And Critique My Personal Statement?

College Essays
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<p>Can any “non HS class of 2009” people read my essay. Specifically looking for college students. Its my main essay for the common app, any help would be greatly appreciated.</p>

<p>The essay is basically about a change in one of my biased viewpoints. Used a story to make my point.</p>

<p>Will PM it to anyone willing to read after checking to confirm college/non HS senior status. Thanks again.</p>

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<p>ill red it pm it to me</p>

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<p>I think you need to send it to me.</p>

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<p>Send away, senor/senorita.</p>

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<p>pm me, i think i could help out</p>

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<p>PM me- I’d be glad to review it and offer suggestions! :)</p>

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<p>pm it over ill try to help</p>