Please Read, Help Needed Desperately

<p>I have to explain why I'm taking a year off from high school for NYU, I wrote it but think it needs hardcore grammar editing.
PLEASE somebody who is good at English grammar, email me to critique and edit my miniessya (about 1/2 a page, it's nothing! please!)</p>

<p>thanks a lot.</p>

<p>thats my email address</p>