Please read my 1st Personal Statement?

Colleges & Universities University of California - Los Angeles
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<p>If anyone would like to read it and critique it I’d greatly appreciate it. I’ll PM it to you.</p>

<p>It’s only the first prompt btw-</p>

<p>“Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.”</p>

<p>Thanks :D</p>

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<p>I may help if you like. Curious of what new students will write.</p>

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<p>I can see that too.</p>