Please read my common app essay--worried about my topic!

<p>Hi, if anyone would be willing to read my common app essay that would be great. I'm worried that my topic is a little too morbid and that I just didn't write it well enough.
This is the first draft of my essay, and i only spent about 45 mins on it so it's definately not fantastic but i would really appreciate any help! thanks!</p>

<p>Anybody please??</p>

<p>Please---anybody??? I really need help and it's due for class really soon! I don't need grammatical editing(my friends can help with that), i just wanted editing on my ideas and stuff.</p>

<p>just pm it over!</p>

<p>just sent you a pm-thanks so much! i really appreciate it,</p>

<p>I'll read it.</p>

<p>Thanks! I'll PM it to you.</p>

<p>Pm it to me!</p>