Please Read My Essay - About my Childhood! I need some direction! Thanks

<p>Okay, I am writing this for commonapp, I am not sure where to go from here (be more descriptive, more ideas, more verbosity).</p>

<p>No 09ers please, I will check you previous posts! :P</p>

<p>If you read, I expect you to give some good constructive criticism - more than a few sentences.</p>

<p>PS: It’s about my childhood, coming into adulthood, and my decision to be an individual, not a conformist.</p>

<p>THANKS!! :D</p>