<p>I wrote an essay about my insecurities in middle school/high school, if anyone would be willing to give it a quick read that would be great! People applying to bigger schools (ivies, states, etc) would be preferred, as I’m not applying to any.</p>
<p>I basically want advice on
-the story of it
-the pacing (does it seem too slow/too long?)</p>
<p>thank you in advance!!!</p>