<p>hey, i need to send it out in the next day or so, so anyone want to read it quickly for me?</p>
<p>How glad I was and also excited to read your essay ! It IS a great piece of writing. It will get you anywhere you want to be. Only it is a bit longer than what you are allowed. However, any reader will agree that the essay is concise and coherent. You should not sacrifice your essay to the length. Good luck !</p>
<p>thanks so much for the great review - you made my day</p>