Please read my UC essays!

<p>I got a really late start on these and finally wrote them yesterday. No one has had a chance to read them over, so I would really appreciate if someone would look at them and give me commentary! I'll PM you if you would like to help. Thanks! :D</p>

<p>I'll help. :)</p>

<p>same here
i'll help</p>

<p>can you all also read mine too? mine needs a lot of editing.. =( i hate to admit but it is please...anyone??</p>

<p>Guys, try the Essays forum.</p>

<p>I'll help.</p>