Please review my Common App essay?

College Essays
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<p>I’ll PM the essay to whoever would like to help me on this</p>

<p>Topic: rappel tower</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>you can send it over too me :D…if I can send over mine :p</p>

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<p>sure! sent you a pm :)</p>

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<p>ill read it :)</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>pm me if you will thanks.</p>