<p>Hi,</p>
<p>I’m applying ED to my first choice school. Time is running out for me. I have just finished my essay. It took me a lot of effort to put things together. I will now look forward to have experienced people to read it and comment on it.</p>
<p>I have written, yet another cliche topic but I do hope that I have successfully pull it off by tweaking it a bit. Please criticize where possible.</p>
<p>No 2015-ers if possible. I am not afraid of plagiarism but I believe that I need someone who has been admitted to their dream school or someone with reputable experience. Most of the time, we tend to respect comments from those who have been admitted.</p>
<p>Thanks. Please reply. I will send as soon as I receive the message.</p>