<p>PLEASE somebody tell me if my 217 essay fits the topic, and help me think of a better beginning and conclusion, pm me. thanks</p>
<p>How can it be OFF topic? It’s just supposed to be about you, right? And it doesn’t need a beginning, middle, and end. It’s a page out of a book. I’ll read it if you like me to, though.</p>
<p>sure, i’ll read it!</p>
<p>I’m not sure if my essay sounds like it’s from a page of a book. That’s what I mean by off topic. I want to change the beginning and ending so that it does sound like it’s from an autobiography, or close to it.</p>
<p>btw, it’s about longboarding if anyone’s interested</p>