<p>Okay I know it’s probably not a 12 essay. But I think I really improved after reading the red book’s suggestions and example essays</p>
<p>Prompt: In some states , legislators have debated whether teenagers should be required to maintain a “C” grade average in highschool before receiving driver’s license. bla bla bla, In your opinion, should teenagers be required to maintain a “C” average in school before receiving a driver’s license?</p>
<p>My Essay:</p>
<p>There is great debate on whether students should be forced to maintain a “C” average to receive a driver’s license. Proponents for the “C” average requirement argue that good grades reflect responsibility. Opponents against the “C” average requirement say that there is no relationship between good grades and driving skills. I do not believe in the “C” average requirement because grades can be arbitrary, and there are already requirements to prove responsibility in driving; however, it is true that grades tend to positively correlate with responsibility.</p>
<p>In highschool, students often fuss about grades. Grades, being the most influential factor in college admissions, are always a topic of discussion because teachers can be unpredictable. In most highschools, teachers are the ones to create their class policies. While they are normally acceptable, there are always instances where they are ridiculous. In my highschool, there are huge disparities in average grades in different classes. Some classes, which are accurately dubbed “jokes” may have all As. Many others are described as “living nightmares,” where grades may hover around the “D” range. Grades not only differ by classes, but by schools. Some schools, such as my neighboring private school, may have lower average grades due to different styles. If some schools have an average GPA of all Cs, then half of its students would be ineligible for a driving license. Thus, because schools, teachers, and students vary from area to area, the value of a “C” grade can change drastically. This emphasizes the unfairness of a “C” grade requirement for driving.</p>
<p>One point that shows the redundancy of a “C” grade average requirement is that most places already have requirements. In fact, students must be at least 16 years of age to receive their permit. However, a permit test must be passed before doing so. Then, the student must typically wait 6 months to take a driver’s test, which if they pass, gives them a driver’s license. As seen here, there are plenty of requirements already in place - enough to make a student groan.</p>
<p>However, it is true that kids with better grades tend to be more responsible. This stereotype is seen in my school. Students who consistently get in trouble and who thus have a low sense of responsibility are almost always those who receive below a “C” level average. These kids show that they would make irresponsible decision on the road, which could be a matter of life and death. On the other hand, students with good grades are those who are typically responsible for their school work and other responsibilities, such as taking care of their younger siblings. This, this positive correlation does support the “C” grade requirement. </p>
<p>In light of all evidence provided, the “C” grade average should not be enforced. While it may prevent irresponsible people from driving, it is offset by arbitrary grading procedures in school which may prevent responsible students and already present procedures which make the grade requirement redundant. </p>
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<p>As I typed it, I noticed the huge amount of grammar errors. oh well.</p>
<p>Please grade!!! advice wanted!!!</p>