Plz help critique my graduate school statement of purpose

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<p>Hi all,</p>

<p>I know I am not supposed to post this in Parent Cafe, but I really need some help from sophisticated perspective. </p>

<p>I am a senior and I am writing the statement of purpose for graduate school application. English is not my mother tongue :frowning: I am an international student.</p>

<p>I am looking for correction on grammar, transition words, sentence structure etc. If I can get some advice on IDEAs as well, that would be great. </p>

<p>Anyone will give me a hand? Your help will be highly appreciated.</p>

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<p>I will look at it if you like but I won’t have time until this evening. If you like, pm it to me.</p>

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<p>@ EPTR </p>

<p>Thank you so much! Please check ur inbox. :)</p>