<p>That is a really good essay. I especially enjoyed the intro. Just a reminder that it is easier to read these essays if you enlarge it (by right clicking when you have the + magnifying glass arrow)</p>
<p>wow bigb14, I’d say the content of most of your essay was about an 8, but the last couple sentences really made it a 10. Superb conclusion, brilliant.</p>
<p>@spideyunlimited: Your introductory paragraph is kind of circuitous despite being brief. The reasoning that follows, however, is very logical and pertinent.
Overall, your whole essay is quite easy to follow and I’d give you a 5 out of 6 if I were a grader. :D</p>