<p>I just want to see if there’s anyone out there who could help me out with writing my NM essay. I chose to write about boxing, then segueway into my accomplishments, plans, and goals, but I’m not too sure if I answered all the questions, or if I put too much into the intro and not enough into my plans and goals. Any help is appreciated. Just post if you can help me out, and I’ll PM it.</p>
<p>Is there anyone out there who can critique my essay?</p>
<p>I’m not sure that this essay is really meant to weed out applicants that much, especially since 15,000 out of 16,000 pass, and most of those who drop are those who simply didn’t fill out their app, got semi based on a fluke score, or were not endorsed by their school. No?</p>