Practice Essay, ? Please Read

College Essays
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<p>I wrote a CommonApp essay for practice, but when I finished I thought that it had potential. I would really appreciate it if you told me how interesting the topic is and your critique. Should I write another one or edit it?</p>

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<p>PM me I will check it out and give you a feedback</p>

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<p>Pm me
Ill check it out</p>

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<p>Hey PM it to me and I’ll tell you how i think it is</p>

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<p>PM me and I will provide you with the feedback.</p>