<p>Hi all! I was invited to apply to my school’s (University of Miami) pre-health mentor program and I decided I’d give it a shot. Among having to turn in my degree audit, resume, and an application I have to write a very short essay on these two things:</p>
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<li> Write a short response on a separate sheet to the following questions:
a. Why would you like to become a Mentor?
b. What characteristics do you possess to serve as a Mentor?</li>
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<p>I wrote my short response and wanted to know if someone could please proofread it and give me feedback on it? I really want to make a good impression.</p>
<p>Thank,
Roxy</p>