Presenting myself as a walking clich

Colleges & Universities Stanford University
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<p>I would really appreciate it if any EA admits (yeah, I’m kinda paranoid) could check this out! :slight_smile:
It is almost 5AM, but I need to finish this essay pretty soon… So, I need YOUR help!</p>

<p>Do I sound like a complete ****** bag? Is it “OK”? Do you really want to meet me? Etc. Ask yourself those questions while reading. If you don’t want to edit my grammar (there are probably a good deal of them, given the time of the day) then just give me a content feedback. </p>

<p>I can take the brutal truth :D</p>

<p>Post below and I’ll PM you :)</p>

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<p>Sure I’ll look it over!</p>

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<p>You can PM me, too. I’ll tell you what I think quickly.</p>

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<p>My son was admitted EA and I’d be happy to read your essay.</p>

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<p>if you need a fourth, i’m here.</p>

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<p>BUMP - need instant critique. Anyone up to giving my ego a good beating?</p>

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<p>I will edit for content and grammar, if you’d like.</p>

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<p>I could look it over too</p>