pretty please.. i need help with my somewhat strange common app essay!

<p>It starts off “I’ve been living in a box” ? I am in serious need of some input so any help will be appreciated! I think it’s my best work so far but I am by no means a writer so please don’t laugh lol</p>

<p>sure, pm me!</p>

<p>Sure I can look</p>

<p>I’ll read as well</p>