<p>does anyone know if this online grader is reliable or not?</p>
<p>for anyone who has taken the PR classes and used the Online STudent Center to grade your essays, is it really grading your essays because sometimes when I get sent back these computerized “criticisms” of my essay, i fix it up like they say, but then I drop like another 2 points on the essay for something else…im sending it again to see if another score generates from the online grader…</p>
<p>if this helps, heres the first essay i sent: (10 according to PR)</p>
<p>Although the proverb “be careful what you wish for, for you might just get it” has become trite and hackneyed over time, its profound meaning is everlasting. Often people view sucess very narrowly. Only considering the current favorable results, they usually become oblivious to the true dangerous nature of their success. This is apparent in the appeasement of Hitle prior to WWII as well as the development of the nuclear bomb by the end of it.
Chamberlain, primer minister of England, returned to England after meeting with Hitler in Munich, Germany prolaiming that he had insured peace and safety for Europe. The meeting was due to Hitler’s expansion into neighboring countries. First he invaded and annexed Austria, and later the Rhinelands between Germany and France. Out of fear of a growing threat, Chamerlain decided to meet with Hitler in order to please Hitler and to stifle his expansion. Notoriously known as appeasement, Chamberlain’s plan was to provide Hitler with the Sudatenlands of Czechoslovakia in order to “appease” Hitler. At Munich, Germany, Chamberlain was able to get Hitler to sign the Munich Agreement taht agreed upon the transfer of the Sudatenlands in return for the halt to German expansion. However, Hitler even after Chamberlain had “successfully” insured safety for Europe, continued to expand and take over parts of Europe. Appeasing Hitler, although at first appeard promising, was in retrospect a disaster because feeding Hitler’s avarice only made him far dangerous.
With Hitler expaning deep into Europe, the race to develop the atomic bomb was becoming intensed. Supervised by Rober Oppenheimer, the Manhattan Project at Los Alamos was reseaching how to create an atomic bomb. In 1942, the Americans were able to dentonate the first atomic bomb in New Mexico. Only a month after the testing, the Americans dropped the bomb on Hiroshima and Nagasaki, completely demolishing the two cities in seconds. Although this saved the lives of many American soldiers and ended the war with Japan, the success of the atomic bomb had devestating effects in history. For example, the Cold War was a time of fear for Americans. Discovering that the Soviets had obtained a nuke of its own, Americans lived in far of being bombed. Even today, we live in a fearful world taht is one bomb away from a nuclear holocaust, all due to the development of the inital bomb in 1942.
Althoug the successes in life may appear beneficial at first, retrospect shows that the consequences are mcuh more devestaing and crippling as showing in the previous two examples.</p>
<p>The only changes i made were i made the conclusion better and fixed some spelling errors…the second essay got an 8 (yea, ***?)</p>