Proof-read and suggestion: CommonApp Childhood to adulthood essay

College Essays
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<p>I’m done with CA essay today. Nope, it’s not too late since most of the colleges on my list have deadlines on or after 1/10. </p>

<p>I need suggestions on coherence, relevance and focus. Also, some idiomatic error can be found. I’d very much appreciate any other advices.</p>

<p>Anyone who is interested please response; I’ll send it.</p>

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<p>Bump anyone please critique it!</p>

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<p>Np!</p>

<p>pm me.</p>

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<p>I would like to read it, if you still need some feedback.</p>

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<p>Thanks all of you guys for your willingness to help me, but I actualy submitted the apps. :(</p>

<p>Thanks again :)</p>