<p>Hello would anyone mind proof reading my definition essay on Pride, using Microsoft Word?</p>
<p>Because no body wanted to edit my essay can someone atleast give me suggestions on improving this one sentence in my essay:</p>
<p>The true form of pride requires voicing opinion for the sake of upholding one’s own values while maintaining a tolerant ambiance in the face of other opinions and an act of passion in protecting what one believes to be right.</p>
<p>This is the one part I feel is awkward in my essay and I have to turn it in by midnight online. please help me someone.</p>