Proofread my NYU Poly Essay?

College Essays
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<p>I have an essay answering the prompt of a book that I have read that has influenced me. If anyone is willing to look it over, I’d be very grateful.</p>

<p>Also, this is one of the supplement prompts: If you could spend one day in New York City with a famous inventor, who would you like it to be, where would you go, and why? </p>

<p>My choice would be Luther Burbank (botanist who invented Russet Burbank potatoes), but I am unsure of which location to take him because I am not familiar with the New York City area.</p>

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<p>I’ve been to New York and can probably help. I’ll proof it for you if you’d like</p>

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<p>Ok, I just need a few locations in New York related to agriculture/growing plants. Can you give me the names and descriptions of some of them?</p>

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<p>PM it to me. I’m an avid fan of reading/touching up essays.</p>

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<p>you should take him to SoHo to go shopping for fashionable articles of clothing. clearly a potato-scientist has no style, no offense to Luther.</p>

<p>Or take him to McDonald’s in Time Square to eat french fries - the fruit of his labors ;)</p>

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<p>I came up with the answer to that prompt using a NYC guidebook…</p>

<p>Now is anyone interested in reading my main essay? Its due by the 15th and I’m mailing it because I have the Dean’s Admission form.</p>

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<p>lmao you guys are such procrastinators. aren’t post offices closed monday for presidents’ day though? idk. ha</p>